Pitching to a job title
A title alone does not tell you what the buyer needs. Name the person who will use the result and the decision they must make, then write for that person.
A sales pitch is a short argument that moves one buyer from their current problem to a decision. It names the problem in the buyer's words, shows the specific change your offer makes and asks for one next step. Write it for a single buyer, because a pitch aimed at everyone persuades no one.
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Name the buyer's role and the decision they face this quarter, in terms they would recognize. Leave out any detail you cannot source.
Describe the cost in lost time, errors or missed work. Use the buyer's own figures when they gave them, and label any estimate as an estimate.
Explain the specific change in two or three sentences. One change per paragraph keeps the argument easy to test.
Give a verifiable example, a named reference you have permission to use, or a pilot result with its date. If you have none yet, say the pilot is new.
Make one request, such as a call or a trial scope. State what happens after the buyer says yes, and who will follow up.
Total: 400 words
Weak: Our solution is the best on the market.
Strong: Requests from your intake form land in one list, and you can export that list as a CSV file.
The strong line describes a change the buyer can picture and test. The weak line asks them to take your word for it.
Weak: Customers love working with us.
Strong: Of the pilot teams you ran, [number] kept the new process after the first month. The follow-up notes list each team and its dates.
A specific, checkable claim with a record behind it. Use it only when the record exists and you can show it.
Weak: Act now before it is too late.
Strong: Reply by Friday if you want a place in the first pilot group. We will confirm the start date in writing.
A deadline the buyer can check, followed by something you will actually do. Remove any urgency you cannot honor.
Weak: We are the easiest option for you.
Strong: Start with one team and one process, and keep your current spreadsheet until the pilot ends.
It describes a low-risk first step in concrete terms, which answers the buyer's real worry about switching.
A title alone does not tell you what the buyer needs. Name the person who will use the result and the decision they must make, then write for that person.
A buyer who finds the price late can feel misled. Say what the first step costs, or say that the price depends on scope and explain what you need to size it.
Testimonials, logos and results need a source and written permission. If the proof is not ready, describe the pilot as it is instead of borrowing someone else's result.
A pitch that ends with let us know gives the buyer no decision to make. Name the next step, the date and the person who will follow up.
Use a public link only for a pitch that is safe for anyone to read. A pitch written for one buyer is usually better sent in a direct message than posted where others can find it.
Send the team link to colleagues who will challenge the claims before the buyer sees them. Ask them to mark any sentence they cannot defend.
Paste the link into the email that accompanies a proposal, or share it from your phone during a call.
Use the button for a buyer who runs their business on WhatsApp. Ask them before you send the link there.
Download the self-contained HTML file when the buyer needs a copy for their records. In a browser it runs as a page, so it is not a document or a presentation file.
A good sales pitch is specific to one buyer. It names their problem, shows what changes after your offer, backs the change with proof that can be checked, and ends with a request they can accept or decline. Length matters less than whether each sentence earns its place.
This guide gives you a structure and worked rewrites, not a file to download. Use the five beats as your outline and write each one from what you know about the buyer. A page that follows the outline reads as a plan rather than a script.
Short enough that the buyer reads it in one sitting, with each section doing one job. If you need more room, put the detailed material on a second page and link to it from the ask.
This tool does not make slide presentations. What you get is a single self-contained page that you send by link, or keep as a file you open in a browser. If the buyer needs slides, build them in your own presentation software using the same five beats.
Lead with the buyer's situation and one specific change, then ask a question that tests whether the change matters to them. Keep the pitch short enough to discuss rather than present, and use the page as a reference they can read after the meeting.
Follow the eight-step wizard: type, assets and description, images, branding, contact and call to action, Atty Suggestions, blueprint, and generate. Atty generates one HTML page in the background. Review it, then publish and share the page link or download the HTML file.